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Thank you so much for your time Charlie! There may be a revised version soon and I will take all of what you said into consideration!
Again thank you very much for your suggestions and critique, very helpful!
I tend to do this hairstyle a lot -you must not have seen my other work- and I barely know who he is and did it before I knew who he was. Sorry if you believe it's "retarded"
And no, she isn't covering herself, she has her arms crossed/resting.
She is clearly able to grab a leaf if she wanted but she isn't "naked" but natural and not a human. She is wearing the leaf mimicking humans actually from my back story otherwise no leaf either lol
is she trying to cover herself? if so she isnt doing a very good job of it. I like everything except the hair. Can't stand those retarded skrillex hairstyles.
Hey Hey! Good going!
Colours look darn good! Really liking those, really strong, especially around the body and the skirt!
As for anatomy. The hands are pretty well done actually, you'll be surprised how many people blame their anatomy skillsets when in fact, it's just the pose that doesn't make sense! (Looks like she's clenching her left hand on her shoulder. If you want her fingers to be on top of the shoulder instead, then the first set of joints in the fingers should slightly higher and be visible!)
The legs don't look like they have foreshortening, thus they look weird and don't have any depth to them despite the colour choices being correct. To fix this, you need to decrease the width of the thighs as it goes down; maybe a pixel or two I would say! There is no part of her leg that looks like the joint is going inward into the foot, instead, it's going downward on a 2D plane (Foreshortening requires some 3D aspects)! You could make this more easier for yourself by allowing the legs to bend backward a bit more, to make it more noticeable.
Your other work shows you have a real nice understanding of anatomy anyway, so I'm sure you know what to do with or without advice! Either way, super work!
Thanks doll!
Yeah about her lower legs, they are supposed to be slightly bend back but it's also her anatomy/shape I gave her including the pointed feet. Sometimes I do things without rhyme or reason lol
I'm not 100% sure about the feet/lower legs but the rest of this I adore, especially the alternating eye colours and shading of the hair C:
The anatomy is pretty great. The colors are definitely a win!
Yes, one of her eyes is blind.
Also I tried to edit the preview as you asked but I am not at home and only have a phone and tablet. I'll try to use my tablet to see if I can add one again.
Is one eye supposed to be in greyscale?
Missing preview file ;)
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Hey! No problem! Always good to help another fellow artist out!
I look forward to the updated version! All the best and keep going! :)