Yeah I should blend those lines more and I do have some issues with the shading I'm not going to lie. I think I rushed it a bit. Thanks!
Oh and the darkness of her scalp and that "hair part" line were a guide..... It's a long story but this was being made for a project I pulled out of so I kinda just wanted it done and out of my hair.
You should really watch out for that banding, it's everywhere!
The inside outlines (jaw, boobs, crotch) are too harsh, relatively to the general contrast and softness of coloring. You might add one or two more colors while you're at it ;)
Nice base overall. Is it her brain I see? XD
the legs are too long. i know you intend for the legs to be exaggerated but its a little much i think
I had poor expectations based on the preview, but that shading and anatomy is really quite good. Only issues are what appears to be a UV seem on her scalp and her right breast looking significantly smaller than the left. and Maybe the neck being a tiny bit short.