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Thanks for the comments everyone, they're very much appreciated!
@Mrmo - noted! thank you!
@Carnivac - I do think the base needs some more work. The structure of it isn't entirely clear. Some of that is a product of the color restrictions, but there is definitely room for improvement there. Thanks for the comment!
It's great though I find the building looks too busy and lacks a focal point as such. It took me a while to identify which rectangle was the actual entrance. Also why is the lady's nose that pink in the portrait. It does make her look bit either drunk or that she has a cold. :P I think the gray a bit darker as it seems not dark enough to contrast against that pink in her hair. Other than those things I really like it. :)
The only nitpick I can make is that the text is not optimally readable with the bold, striped textbox background. I like everything else, especially the colour choice!
I love the coloring style. It creates a unique look for your piece. 
Dig the color palette! an the character, kudos