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Okay, tried changing the sprite accoring to your suggestion(s). How is it now?
I'm still not sure about the mouth/tongue, though. Maybe I should remove the tongue altogether if it's problematic enough...
I like the overall shape and colour, the rear (as in furthest from the viewer) could be a bit darker, more like the underside of the creature and I think the tongue needs work, it looks more like it's holding a bitof meat in its mouth rather than being part of the creature, though I can't advise you on how to fix it. Perhaps make the side of the mouth that is partially open darker?
Edit: I think you should bring the gl logo down a bit to make it look more like a branded rump. :)
The logo looks much better as does the tongue I've had a little play and perhaps taking that layer of brown pixels off where the tongue leaves the head (next to the top black pixel of the crease in the tongue)