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I think the perspective on the 'flat' top of the tree is different from the one on the roots, but this is still very pretty.
The style is very curious, I like it. Anyway, I think it needs a little bit of volume in both sides (left and right). I mean that I think you should put the light spot on top of the tree slightly more like an oval and add the shadows below the figure, taking the light reference as a base. I don't know if i am really right saying this, because the exact perspective of the treetop is a bit confusing. Is that a 60% top view?
Ignore me a bit, I think that the tree is quite nice already.
Blue leaves still feel a little out of place. I feel like you should add another that's higher and to the right of the current cluster of them seeing as though the tree is being lit from the top and the left side (according to the trunk), might make them look a bit more rounded in. Adding another one or two on the other side might also help.
Very nice style though, I really like those bubbly leaves!
Oh wow! It's unbelievable how much you and BTeKs have improved! My god, I need to catch up!
@caca, yep, hehe.
@FlyGuy, thankya and now that you mention it I think you are right about the blue leaves, I added a few more although they might still feel out of place.
Although the shapes aren't straight lines, I thought this was MrMo's from the preview.. great job on this, I love the colors especially. The 2 blue leaves feel a bit out of place though. Maybe add a few more?
Thanks for the comments and for pointing out the perspective issues everybody.
Yours a good critic Marina, Bark and Muffin, I'll see now that I have some free time If I can edit the tree and fix some of its problems.
@AJ, you're pretty good as well dude, you are overestimating me xD.
@Ubisavis, thank ya.