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Not really THAAAAT impressed, to be honest. I mean, still a hell of a lot better than I can do, but not quite as awesome as you can achieve. Couple 'o crits:
The cape doesn't seem to be getting blown back to the same degree as the robe and his lower genie-like self.
His bottom half fades indefinitely. I'd almost like to see it more clearly shown as connected to him. First glance I thought it was some... spell... thing he was casting, or something.
WHERE. is your lightsource? Not doubting that you have one, just... legitimately asking. I mean, the top and bottom of his robe are highlighted, and the fingers on his one hand are practically glowing (whereas his palm is almost black) and his whispy lower portion is brightest in the center, as opposed to an edge.
One last thing. The brightness of the lower half and the sleeve bring attention to them, rather than to the face or some other distinguishing feature. It's almost hard to look at the face, which was very well done, btw.
Don't take this as it sucking, because it very much doesn't. Just... I don't see it as the awesome that you've produced before.