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RedKnight91 @ 1/27/2013 13:59 commented on first idle animation

 It's better now!! Both in speed and movement : ) (maybe the head is still tilting a bit too much but ok, don't get stuck on just one animation : D )



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RedKnight91 @ 1/25/2013 08:31 commented on first idle animation

 It's a strange movement for an idle animation, looks like he's humping it's invisible dino-girlfriend : D

However, it's good for a first time : )



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RedKnight91 @ 11/22/2012 02:41 commented on Businessmen

 Yeah thanks, totally going for an Adarias vibe in this piece!



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RedKnight91 @ 11/5/2012 05:32 commented on Tattoo Beach boy

   Thanks broski : p



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RedKnight91 @ 11/5/2012 05:31 commented on Old man

 Thanks broski : p



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RedKnight91 @ 10/24/2012 03:55 commented on Autumn forest 5

 The leaves are starting to look like fur, lol



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RedKnight91 @ 10/22/2012 11:56 commented on El Swamp Pistolero

 This is really unique!!!



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RedKnight91 @ 10/15/2012 23:40 commented on Mountain background

 Awesome palette.



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RedKnight91 @ 10/15/2012 03:38 commented on Nude Character

 maybe add more contrast on the skin, she looks like she's made of rubber or chewing-gum : D



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RedKnight91 @ 10/12/2012 03:42 commented on Frog

 Thank you!

It surprised me how cool windows 7's MS paint's palette is!



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RedKnight91 @ 10/11/2012 08:59 commented on Fearsome Bumblebee

But in that GIF you can see that Gohan's body almost has no shadows, while you chose to give him a good contrast on legs and clothes etc, so I don't understand why you left just the hair flat : o



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RedKnight91 @ 10/11/2012 06:03 commented on Fearsome Bumblebee

Well, it's not bad for sure, but it's got some errors in my opinion:

Some things look flat, like his hair (not even a little highlight!), the sword and flower (no shadows), his left arm looks weird, because of the position and shadow, it's basically flat! You should add some shadow to make it deeper, and maybe a soft light-blue highlight on the hand (sky light).

His scarf gradient is a little "too much" if you know what I mean. I mean, it's going from very dark to very light even if it's under his chin. There should be a little shadow on the middle too, right?

The pose is too much dispersive, I mean, his limbs are swinging in 4 different directions! He looks like he is falling on his side, instead of running away from the bee.

The grass is too flat, try adding some highlight on the top of the grass blades and some shadow on the ground between the blades.

The clouds are kinda lazy, I mean, they're entirely made from big circles, they look more like mist or something.

What's up with his left foot? Does he have just 3 fingers on it? It looks like a duck's foot, lol

I like the palette though, very cartoony.

I hope my C&C is appreciated and not offensive : )

 

 



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RedKnight91 @ 10/10/2012 02:30 commented on Lycan Smash

I'm sure AbyssWolf's palette was used here : )

That explains why the palette is the best thing in this piece of pixel art : D

http://abysswolf.deviantart.com/gallery/392359#/d1p0kr2

Not bad though, keep going!



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RedKnight91 @ 10/7/2012 23:58 commented on The Great Circus Mystery - Achievement Icons

 Beautiful! Very good : D



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RedKnight91 @ 10/5/2012 00:54 commented on Pirate themed side scroller

 Your other piece is a perfect example of what I meant, 3D grass, with blades of grass popping out of the terrain! : )



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RedKnight91 @ 10/4/2012 23:55 commented on Space marines

 Thank you!  : )



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RedKnight91 @ 10/4/2012 23:54 commented on Space marines

Thank you! : )

Yeah I had to go simple 'cause I know I had to animate them : D



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RedKnight91 @ 10/4/2012 06:46 commented on Old man

 Thanks man : )



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RedKnight91 @ 10/4/2012 02:07 commented on Pirate themed side scroller

 Awesome palette!!!! I love this, but some thing are bothering me!

The tree is awesome (expecially the trunk), but the outline of the leaves is too circled to be natural, a tree should have a silhouette made by the points of the leaves sticking out, like this http://cdn.planetminecraft.com/files/resource_media/screenshot/1218/Tree_2166149.jpg

Another thing is the ground. It looks good, but it's a bit flat, couldn't you add 1px to make the tallest blades of grass look more 3D-ish?



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RedKnight91 @ 10/4/2012 02:03 commented on Old man

 Thank you : ) I'm proud of this one : )



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RedKnight91 @ 10/4/2012 01:08 commented on Happy Fish

 Okay! I'm gonna try to push the contrast some more then : )



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RedKnight91 @ 10/4/2012 00:59 commented on Bouncy guy

Thanks guys! The nose is much cooler on a light background : D

The hair is bouncing too : )



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RedKnight91 @ 10/4/2012 00:58 commented on Random scene

 @Mhyre Thank you! The crate is what bugs me the most, I'm sure I could improve it a lot as of today : D

What would you change on the sign?



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RedKnight91 @ 10/4/2012 00:57 commented on Random scene

 @Xamllew haha, maybe it's the colors?



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RedKnight91 @ 10/4/2012 00:56 commented on Western house

 @beetleking 'Cause I used that palette ; ) But the drawing is all original : D