The idea is nice, however this looks like a sketch, not an actual piece.

The HUD/UI looks great, but the sprites in the "game" itself are lacking. 

The sky doesn't change. The huge celestial object the moon is, just never seems to change it's place in sky. It shaking around would add a camera wobble effect, but I didn't really want that. 

I like it too, however the frames seem weird. 

I was thinking about the classic videogame musclemen, not people in reality and the videogame musclemen always have terribly small heads. :D 

The shading is... off. 

Nope. It's a videogame. Videogame bullets move slow. ;D 

 It ends fast because he has to get the gun up. I don't think it starts fast, maybe it's unexpected, but why would he waste time?! :D Well, it's not a completely finished thing anyway. I'd still need jumping running etc.

XD

Elmo's evil twin. :D 

Hmm, I see your point. I'lll edit that in the final thing then. 

@PizzaEnergy - Not at all. Just a weird fantasy character. :] 

@jazcks - Why don't you like it? I can only fix a problem if I know the problem.

:D True dat, true dat. 

The product at the moment looks quite a lot different. I just don't want to put it up before the game is done.  

Thanks. I kinda noticed that from the avatar. :] 

The "dithering" looks really messy. Looks like his skin is peeling off or something.

Looks great.  

It's supposed to be more of a chase in which the red guy tries to loose his "tail". :]

Thank you! :] 

Is there supposed to be some weird black stuff on the rear legs "feet" of the robot?

Also, agree with Shiru, that she looks more like a victim. :D 

Thanks! :D 

The chest seems to have a mind of it's own. :D

Comletely agree with the previous poster. 

 You shold poke the palette around. The green and blue bite my eyes a little too much.

What is it supposed to be? Surely not a rocket polishing season. 

Looks quite fancy, but 15 colors? Lolwut. 

You should probably get the castle parts a little "dirty" to show that it isn't floating above the mud. Removing the shadows would probably help too.

Disregarding the floating castle defect, the piece looks great!