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shiritt @ 6/10/2011 04:29 commented on Electrolf

"Hope you like it!"
Well, your hopes are about to come true.

I like it, a lot, cool effects you made with only 10 colors, nice shading, nice everything really.



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shiritt @ 6/9/2011 01:06 commented on Doorway

You could have spiced things up if you made windows and stuff in the wall, now it looks kinda repetative (almost as repetative as people saying it), also, the planks are rather bland, they could use shade and heighlights, because they don't fit in with the shaded stones.



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shiritt @ 6/9/2011 01:03 commented on Sprite

Wow, monsters like this would make such a badass game, very neat colors.



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shiritt @ 6/9/2011 01:01 commented on The Green Garden of Rabbit

Bunneh!

You've seem to master depth really well, giving this piece some baddass look.

Congrats :P

p.s. i also like the way you progress from detail to the simple background, it really works well.



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shiritt @ 6/9/2011 00:57 commented on Slagwaker

Great sprite, it looks really professional.

I believe i can't find anything wrong, and even if i could, coming from me it would be meaningless :P



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shiritt @ 6/9/2011 00:55 commented on Kindler

I like it, a lot.

Even though i like your previous works better, this is still one hell of a cool monster.

Maybe its just me, but it looks like the kind of monster that has a tail :P

 

The shading doesn't seem to be very special, but it works really well, which is really cool.

All in all, great monster.



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shiritt @ 6/9/2011 00:51 commented on Cube

Its a cube :O

no but seriously, nice edges, but it looks like the  "dark " dithering comes from a different angle (the bottom) than the light (the cornor) .

still nice though :P



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shiritt @ 6/7/2011 02:52 commented on Sea-rex

I believe it would looked better if he titled his head a little.

Also, his teeth seems to be showing before he has opened his mounth far enough.



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shiritt @ 6/7/2011 02:48 commented on Icon - Clover

I don't believe colors are so bad :P, as long as the final product looks good.

Could have used something in the middle though, becouse ive never seen a flat clover like that, it looks like its one big leaf now.



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shiritt @ 6/7/2011 02:46 commented on Through the Haze we Create

Shockingly good :O

And a year of work O.o, talk about dedication :P (i know it isn't fulltime, but still).
I did see some very small mistakes (black bar under left arm, weird bumb on second from right lightbulb), however, what |||| already said, these are overshadowed by the total awesomeness.



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shiritt @ 6/7/2011 02:35 commented on Underwater background

@Smilecythe

True, i wanted to move on, so i didn't spend enough time on the ground, but since its my second work, i believed it was good enough :P

next time i'll try to be less sloppy.



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shiritt @ 6/6/2011 10:13 commented on the fieth [in memmory of Buzy]

 I like it, i know im probably far to late to tell, but the his right leg is weird :P. and the sword could use some more awesomeness, but i totally like the feeling of this piece.



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shiritt @ 6/6/2011 09:59 commented on spess mehreens

 I'll agree with cure (who am i to do otherwise ;P), but the left one has a thing on his back which doesn't look perfectly centered :S i don't know if this is what you were trying to achieve, if so i rest my case :P.

Cool metal effect though. 



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shiritt @ 6/6/2011 09:48 commented on Beholder boss

 Yeah i think it should be safe to use to, but i find the lightning on his had rather strange :S



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shiritt @ 6/6/2011 09:11 commented on EGG Shell

 Very nice work,  the mouth piece of his helmet seems to reshape though :/

 

Still, the colors are well picked, and the lightning seems to be fine, so nice job :P



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shiritt @ 6/6/2011 09:09 commented on Hearty heart of heartness

Nice use of colors, but i'll have to agree with you that its not so romantic as you tried :P

I can give you little to no tips though :/, it looks fine as it is :P



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shiritt @ 6/6/2011 09:03 commented on A Ride Up the Hill

 I believe you pillow shaded the ground :S, which is strange because the rest is shaded differently.

Clouds are nice though :P, nice sprite overall.



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shiritt @ 6/6/2011 08:55 commented on Mini Circuit

 Totally awesome, i totally want to make a game out of that :O

o wait i stopped doing that.

anyway, great work, it looks totally awesome.
really a game i would play :P

1 problem, it looks like your stones doesn't have shadows, while the bushes do :S



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shiritt @ 6/6/2011 05:53 commented on Death's Scythe

Really cool animation, but i think a few points could be improved.

his chest looks REALLY flat, the lightning of his belly seems to be in the center, and his torso outline is rather linair, a bit more musculine would look a lot better.

Ofcourse its an cool animation nonetheless.

-Shiritt



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shiritt @ 6/6/2011 02:23 commented on sunshine

Simple, dark, i love it :P

Very nice style, really captured that "nature" feeling.



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shiritt @ 6/6/2011 00:25 commented on Underwater background

Realism wasn't one of my goals while making this, i was planning to make a game where fish fought with bazooka's, so i technically can do whatever i want :P.

And maybe the easter egg was a bit to obvious, i'll try to make it harder next time.

About the angle, i think i didn't noticed that while making the background, i'll look into that.

 

Thanks for the critique



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shiritt @ 6/5/2011 15:38 commented on Isometric chess set

 You should make a game out of this, its real easy, just learn how to program, some advanced mathematics, some advanced AI, and your ready to go :D.

No but seriously, love the style, but the black horses look terribly non-interested :P



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shiritt @ 6/5/2011 15:34 commented on Kylin Zhang _original

 Looks shockingly amazing, however, I'm not planning on buying whatever your trying to sell.



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shiritt @ 6/5/2011 15:31 commented on I'm from a pretty obscure game, you probably haven't heard of it.

Since when did sonic get that art scholarship?

Awesome drawing,  but his left (right in the picture) sleeve looks strange :P

 

still awesome pic though, and +3.2 Interwebs for the meme reference.

You can spend those at some place, but you probably haven't heard from it.



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shiritt @ 6/5/2011 15:25 commented on Hand Gliding Ninja

This picture is incorrect, if it was a ninja, you would only see the glider.

And who does the glider look like a giant paper airplane :P

Cute style btw :P