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a-jay @ 8/21/2012 11:28 commented on Random Gangsta Guy

The picture looks a bit grey and dull to me. Maybe try to make the figure pop a bit more (more color).



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a-jay @ 8/21/2012 11:22 commented on retro + 3d

Original idea and excellent execution.



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a-jay @ 8/13/2012 12:38 commented on Little Jumping Character

Cute little thing.



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a-jay @ 8/12/2012 05:27 commented on Mocha & Latte

Nice piece, and cute teddy. However, I find it slightly annoying that the teddy's eyebrows are so dark. It makes it look like it has two sets of eyes to me...



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a-jay @ 8/12/2012 05:20 commented on Say no! to capitalism

Nice work. But there's too much black in the piece, remember black tends to be a very dominant color. Consider using a lighter color for shadows/outlines. Also you have too many colors, you could remove at least five colors without affecting the quality of the work.



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a-jay @ 8/12/2012 05:14 commented on Character for a game.

This feels more like a work in progress than a finished work.



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a-jay @ 8/11/2012 15:15 commented on Patrick - Avatar

He looks like he's a bit sick (green in the face). Otherwise I like the art.



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a-jay @ 8/11/2012 13:28 commented on Challenge medals

Nice and quite imaginative medals. I like them.



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a-jay @ 8/11/2012 13:24 commented on Stranded

The water has a lot of potential, but it's not quite there. I would give it a color distinct from the sky, add a few waves (besides the ones we see in the reflection) and dither the reflection a bit.

Otherwise I like your piece.



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a-jay @ 8/11/2012 13:18 commented on Gene Run Animation

Nice and smooth animation.



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a-jay @ 8/11/2012 07:51 commented on Drunken Boxing Ninja

Cute little ninja. Maybe he's practising drunken boxing?

Altough I think you could've used one or two colors less and gotten away with it.



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a-jay @ 8/11/2012 06:26 commented on Oak Tree

I've desaturated the greens a bit, and edited a little here and there...



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a-jay @ 8/11/2012 02:02 commented on aoaoaoaoao

Nice animation. I like how the little guy runs between the trees, it gives a feeling of depth. The characters look a little flat to me, but it is maybe intended to be this way?



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a-jay @ 8/11/2012 01:59 commented on Misty Forest

Nice draft. I like the trees. Altough polishing it more wouldn't hurt, as mentioned by the others below.



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a-jay @ 8/10/2012 15:09 commented on sekta

I like your work, but the background is a gradient, which is a big no-no in pixel art. I think it would be better if the background was transparent.

Also you don't need to blow it up this big. Actually, you don't have to blow it up at all because this site lets you zoom in on pieces if necessary anyway.



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a-jay @ 8/10/2012 15:06 commented on Portrait

I would try to put a bit anti-alias on the edges. Otherwise, good work for being your first pixel art ever.



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a-jay @ 8/10/2012 15:04 commented on Aurora

Great piece! Altough maybe you should make the two small figures in the middle stand out a bit more against the profiles in the background...



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a-jay @ 8/10/2012 11:54 commented on Oak Tree

Thanks a lot hnt6581, Dredlockz, Mikebissle and Geolm for your kind words!

Geolm, you have a good point. I was a bit unsure myself of whether the green might be a bit sharp. I'll have a look at that later.



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a-jay @ 8/10/2012 11:51 commented on Simple scene

The sharp edges of the character doesn't blend too well in with the background. Also the caracter looks flat, maybe a bit of shading may be in place.

Also there is a tendency to pillow shading on the hearts in the upper left corner.



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a-jay @ 8/10/2012 11:48 commented on CAT32

Looks more like a cat than a dog to me...

And now I see that it is supposed to be a cat. Duh.



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a-jay @ 8/10/2012 11:47 commented on Commie General

The skin looks a bit too shiny. Possibly too many shades.



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a-jay @ 8/10/2012 11:46 commented on Rainy City

Nice scene. Although it feels more like a background/backdrop rather than a self-contained piece,



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a-jay @ 8/10/2012 11:43 commented on Dancing flowerman

Cute. I like the animation.



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a-jay @ 8/9/2012 16:03 commented on Onc' Pixou

Nice take on Uncle Scrooge.



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a-jay @ 8/9/2012 15:34 commented on Clockwork Rian - intro image 2

Impressive artwork. I can only dream of ever getting to that level of skill.