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Top Pixel Art - August 2013 (#9)
Solid pixeling, but the priorities are messed up, mostly because of the contrast/values.
The sprites aren't reading well from the background, same with the HUD. Remember that our eyes are first drawn to the brightest object, which is the object highest in value. Usually that is the sprite/HUD layer.
In the spring version, the BG trumps everything else. It keeps beckoning the viewer's eye back to look at it, instead of the characters or objects in the forground. The function of the BG should be for setting and decoration, which should recede and give the eye some areas for rest.
Love the concept and the overall mood/design. Hope this helps.
wow, love the folliage.
Only thing is that flipping those trees messes with the overall lighting, it seems they have separate light sources, since the lighting comes from the side a bit.
Super pretty. However, it feels like the characters don't contrast enough with the background- maybe desaturate the background elements a little or outline the characters.
Não dont, no texto ele explicou as partes que ele fez e as partes que o battle fez
beautyful! I can see much work were put in these pieces
My only suggestion is to work on the contrast. everything looks washed and the colors needs more bibrance.
I can put the two things, sprites that I made and mockup as primary pixel art instead of put the mockup in the description?
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I did what I was trying to say, now it can be accepted? :S
It's tough to say. I'm no mod, but seeing that you have a list of what you contributed to this project that may help your chances. You may need Battle to post here, or perhaps make a joint account as an alternative, if this does happen to get rejected.
Good piece, by the way. The trees are very well done.
if I put a picture in the description with the parts that I did it will be accepted?
(I think it hasn't been accepted because it is a collaberation. The mods like to know who has done what parts of the picture. There was a debate about this kind of thing a few weeks back.
see here- http://www.pixeljoint.com/pixelart/79823.htm
and here- http://www.pixeljoint.com/pixels/chatterbox.asp?q=1&pg=3 [scroll down to jal, cure, and wolfenoctis's posts])
I voted Yes for the gallery.
I don't really understand why it isn't still there.
If I had to find one thing wrong, I'd say that the highlights on the background trees stand out a little too much, but otherwise: Wow. Thats a very nice piece of art! 
i really like it ! sadly im only level one, so i can't vote for the gall :(
All the work here is excellent, but the trees in particular are my favorite. The texturing on the bark and foliage is top notch!
The only thing I dislike about this is the text. It's an awkward read.
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