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| administrator Admiral   Joined: 03 March 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 0 |     Topic: CHALLENGE 10/10/2011: Apple ][ Posted: 10 October 2011 at 12:01am | 
| CHALLENGE: Apple ][Given the recent passing of Steve Jobs, it seems only fitting to have an Apple-related challenge. Transparency - No. Animation - Optional. CHALLENGE RULES
 CHALLENGE JUDGING
 CHALLENGE PRIZES/GOODIES
 CHALLENGE VOTINGVote now for your favorite pixelart in this week's challenge!CHALLENGE AWARDSThe Apple ][ pixel art challenge is complete and we have three new champions. This week's challenge awards go to the following pieces:Thanks so much to all who took the time to vote and participate in the challenge! | |
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| Elk Commander     Joined: 12 May 2024 Online Status: Offline Posts: 483 |     Posted: 10 October 2011 at 8:49am | 
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   We can not rotate that canvas I believe?
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| Jiroumoon Seaman     Joined: 31 December 2009 Online Status: Offline Posts: 20 |     Posted: 10 October 2011 at 11:11am | 
|    My first time entering a weekly contest here on PJ     This is what I have so far. I thought I'd go with the apple team and maybe a young Jobs? :)  Cloudy dreams~ Edit: picture updated Edited by Jiroumoon - 11 October 2011 at 3:30am | |
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| Cyangmou Midshipman     Joined: 15 December 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 68 |     Posted: 10 October 2011 at 2:26pm | 
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   @Elk: I don't think so too, because width and height is especially given this time with brackets. rough as hell, but the sh*tty colors come out better than I thought the motive should be something which has to do with an apple =)  | |
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| Jinn Rear Admiral     Joined: 15 June 2021 Online Status: Offline Posts: 190 |     Posted: 10 October 2011 at 4:39pm | 
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  "It can build anything you want, anytime you want... It can even bring people back to life. Today, apple is going to reinvent the life as we know it. I present, a pixel."   Edited by Jinn - 10 October 2011 at 7:24pm | |
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| Friend Commander     Joined: 01 April 2015 Online Status: Offline Posts: 710 |     Posted: 10 October 2011 at 5:07pm | 
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   win^
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| mdog95 Commander     Joined: 14 December 2017 Online Status: Offline Posts: 150 |     Posted: 10 October 2011 at 5:50pm | 
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   I think I'll make what he perceived to be a far future generation of one his company's products along with something meaningful displaying on the screen.  I haven't yet decided which product though...
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| Mrmo Tarius Commander     Joined: 12 February 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 367 |     Posted: 11 October 2011 at 1:27am | 
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   This has nothing to do with Apple whatsoever:
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| Jinn Rear Admiral     Joined: 15 June 2021 Online Status: Offline Posts: 190 |     Posted: 11 October 2011 at 6:23am | 
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   I think I'm out, lol
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| yrizoud Commander     Joined: 03 May 2021 Location: France Online Status: Offline Posts: 343 |     Posted: 11 October 2011 at 6:36am | 
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   The iDot was copyrighted ?
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| tomic Midshipman     Joined: 21 July 2020 Online Status: Offline Posts: 93 |     Posted: 11 October 2011 at 11:49am | 
| Originally posted by Jinn "It can build anything you want, anytime you want... It can even bring people back to life. Today, apple is going to reinvent the life as we know it. I present, a pixel."  so what are you waiting for? cannot fave it in the forums :) @mrmp tarius: nice, too :) | |
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     pixel suit up!
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| Gecimen Admiral     Joined: 17 October 2021 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3856 |     Posted: 11 October 2011 at 12:38pm | 
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   Elk Jinn and Mrmo joining the challenge... I think we're all out :P
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| Jinn Rear Admiral     Joined: 15 June 2021 Online Status: Offline Posts: 190 |     Posted: 11 October 2011 at 1:06pm | 
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   Done :)
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| Gecimen Admiral     Joined: 17 October 2021 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3856 |     Posted: 11 October 2011 at 1:29pm | 
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   can't see it in the public queue though... ??
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| Cyangmou Midshipman     Joined: 15 December 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 68 |     Posted: 11 October 2011 at 1:37pm | 
|  For God doth know that in the day ye eat thereof, then your eyes shall be opened , and ye shall be as gods, knowing good and evil. | |
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| Jinn Rear Admiral     Joined: 15 June 2021 Online Status: Offline Posts: 190 |     Posted: 11 October 2011 at 3:28pm | 
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I was wondering, Is it worth to change?  Edited by Jinn - 11 October 2011 at 8:16pm | |
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| surt Commander     Joined: 30 December 2015 Online Status: Offline Posts: 413 |     Posted: 11 October 2011 at 3:40pm | 
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   Djinni: The iPixel Nano doesn't look significant enough a part of the image for my liking. Maybe something in between the two? Trust Apple to take a voxel and label it a pixel so that from now on every trendy git will call voxel pixel and the term pixel will become meaningless. And no doubt they'll patent the pixel and the voxel and start suing anyone who uses pixels in their art or hardware and anyone uses the term pixel except to refer to their device and anyone who develops a product in any way vaguely similar so hexels and texels are out too. | |
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| Jinn Rear Admiral     Joined: 15 June 2021 Online Status: Offline Posts: 190 |     Posted: 11 October 2011 at 3:54pm | 
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So should I change to it ( v ) in order to not mistake pixels with voxels?  [edit] If so, what about this?  Edited by Jinn - 11 October 2011 at 4:03pm | |
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| Loonybin Seaman     Joined: 05 July 2011 Online Status: Offline Posts: 31 |     Posted: 11 October 2011 at 4:29pm | 
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   I liked the pixel in 3d better, even though technically it's a voxel.
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| Jinn Rear Admiral     Joined: 15 June 2021 Online Status: Offline Posts: 190 |     Posted: 11 October 2011 at 6:41pm | 
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   I did put a little more effort on this one.  | |
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| JerryPie Rear Admiral     Joined: 01 October 2024 Online Status: Offline Posts: 232 |     Posted: 11 October 2011 at 6:54pm | 
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   jinn why not a 3d flickering pixel
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| Friend Commander     Joined: 01 April 2015 Online Status: Offline Posts: 710 |     Posted: 11 October 2011 at 8:05pm | 
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   I prefer the flickering 2D pixel.  It is more... pixelly
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| Jinn Rear Admiral     Joined: 15 June 2021 Online Status: Offline Posts: 190 |     Posted: 11 October 2011 at 8:10pm | 
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   Thanks, guys. And sorry for the flood, but... Wich one reads better for Steve Jobs?  | |
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| jalonso Admiral     Joined: 29 November 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 13537 |     Posted: 11 October 2011 at 8:12pm | 
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@jinn, I thought the big pixel was great but the newest flickering one is even better. E: New version is better because he looks less 'ill'. Even though the face wasn't right before it still clearly read Steve Jobs to me. Edited by jalonso - 11 October 2011 at 8:12pm | |
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| Adam Midshipman     Joined: 26 July 2021 Online Status: Offline Posts: 85 |     Posted: 12 October 2011 at 1:05am | 
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   I present you: The Applegang!  | |
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| Gecimen Admiral     Joined: 17 October 2021 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3856 |     Posted: 12 October 2011 at 1:42am | 
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Haha nice one. But who's the second from left? William Tell? Edited by Gecimen - 12 October 2011 at 1:43am | |
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| Chibiwing Commander     Joined: 02 June 2024 Online Status: Offline Posts: 122 |     Posted: 12 October 2011 at 2:50am | 
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   Looks like Shakespeare or Medieval Chef Boyardee to me.
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| Adam Midshipman     Joined: 26 July 2021 Online Status: Offline Posts: 85 |     Posted: 12 October 2011 at 3:46am | 
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He is mr. Tell himself. After a short "research" I am thinking about adding Karel Appel and the Beatles too. Too much? Edited by Adam - 12 October 2011 at 3:46am | |
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| Gecimen Admiral     Joined: 17 October 2021 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3856 |     Posted: 12 October 2011 at 3:50am | 
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   Beatles? Can't see the relevance.. Plus it would be much too crowded. | |
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| jalonso Admiral     Joined: 29 November 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 13537 |     Posted: 12 October 2011 at 5:51am | 
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   @Adam, shouldn't Susan Kare be the 4th!
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| Jinn Rear Admiral     Joined: 15 June 2021 Online Status: Offline Posts: 190 |     Posted: 12 October 2011 at 7:52am | 
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Why not Ryuk from Death Note? lol  Edited by Jinn - 12 October 2011 at 7:56am | |
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| Arnaldo Seaman   .gif)  Joined: 07 October 2011 Online Status: Offline Posts: 8 |     Posted: 12 October 2011 at 5:32pm | 
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| Loonybin Seaman     Joined: 05 July 2011 Online Status: Offline Posts: 31 |     Posted: 12 October 2011 at 6:14pm | 
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   the CD isnt really round, and the hair looks wack :P
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| mdog95 Commander     Joined: 14 December 2017 Online Status: Offline Posts: 150 |     Posted: 12 October 2011 at 8:58pm | 
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   The shading is weird, I don't really see Steve Jobs in your drawing of him, and the CD makes his hand look REALLY big.  Try fixing all of those issues.
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| Gecimen Admiral     Joined: 17 October 2021 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3856 |     Posted: 13 October 2011 at 7:30am | 
| Originally posted by mdog95 The shading is weird, I don't really see Steve Jobs in your drawing of him, and the CD makes his hand look REALLY big. Try fixing all of those issues. It's not supposed to be Steve Jobs. At least the rules don't say so. Edited by Gecimen - 13 October 2011 at 7:30am | |
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| Cyangmou Midshipman     Joined: 15 December 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 68 |     Posted: 13 October 2011 at 10:10am | 
|  overworked the colors, special thanks to Manupix for his very good advice and I changed the complete anatomy of the woman. Also the overall perspective should be now a bit nicer than before. @Arnaldo: try to make the elbow like an elbow and give the limb an crack, that should help. Also the lower arm is a touch to long. | |
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| CELS Commander     Joined: 23 September 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 758 |     Posted: 13 October 2011 at 10:56am | 
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   @Cyangmou: The colours are a big improvement. I'm not sure about the clouds though. Everything else is so crisp and clearly defined, but the clouds just melt into the sky. Also, why are the clouds brighter underneath? Looking at the way you've shaded the tree, the grass and the characters, it doesn't look like the sun is setting. @Arnaldo: I think the hair should be broken down into smaller "chunks", curls or locks of hair, if you will. I also think you should look at the proportions of the upper body, such as by creating a clear elbow joint that connects (and separates) the upper and lower arm. Right now, the entire arm is just a curve. Edited by CELS - 13 October 2011 at 10:59am | |
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| Arnaldo Seaman   .gif)  Joined: 07 October 2011 Online Status: Offline Posts: 8 |     Posted: 13 October 2011 at 5:55pm | 
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| JeffPNO Seaman   Joined: 07 October 2011 Online Status: Offline Posts: 5 |     Posted: 13 October 2011 at 6:18pm | 
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   Easter egg in the cloud D:Nice work    | |
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| philippejugnet Commander     Joined: 21 April 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 459 |     Posted: 13 October 2011 at 6:35pm | 
|   =D that's my version, a master and a boss always put himself in first and last place. | |
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| JeffPNO Seaman   Joined: 07 October 2011 Online Status: Offline Posts: 5 |     Posted: 13 October 2011 at 7:39pm | 
|  Any suggestions on how I could improve this? The damn colours... Also, am I allowed to have the border? It's still 140 x 192, with the border. Edited by JeffPNO - 14 October 2011 at 5:59pm | |
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| surt Commander     Joined: 30 December 2015 Online Status: Offline Posts: 413 |     Posted: 13 October 2011 at 8:27pm | 
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   JeffPNO: Make it more clearly apple-shaped so it is unambiguous that it represents the appleocalypse.
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| Adam Midshipman     Joined: 26 July 2021 Online Status: Offline Posts: 85 |     Posted: 13 October 2011 at 11:51pm | 
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   Well, I found my previous wip so lifeless I have redone the whole thing:  But sadly it seems I won't have the time to finish it this week. Well, I had my fun with it, and who knows, maybe I'll do finish it after the challenge. | |
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| showtime Commander     Joined: 14 May 2020 Online Status: Offline Posts: 105 |     Posted: 14 October 2011 at 1:10am | 
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   Might actually participate in this one, at least if I gain more artistic direction.  I think there's a pretty heavy Mrmo Tarius influence going on.  | |
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| philippejugnet Commander     Joined: 21 April 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 459 |     Posted: 14 October 2011 at 5:57am | 
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   meh, th is is bad Edited by philippejugnet - 23 October 2012 at 4:51pm | |
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| jalonso Admiral     Joined: 29 November 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 13537 |     Posted: 14 October 2011 at 6:25am | 
| Originally posted by Arnaldo my wip  The pixelling quaility is very poor and needs improvement. Public queue scoring has been even poorer so it has been sent back. You are new to PJ and pixelart so don't be hurt by this. Learn from it. Pixelart in a pixelart site requires a certain level of pixel precision and control you have yet to master. This is just about practicing and working at it and you'll soon get it. This forum is for help to those who wish to help themselves so take advantage of this. | |
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| Des Seaman     Joined: 09 July 2017 Online Status: Offline Posts: 10 |     Posted: 14 October 2011 at 11:24am | 
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   This is my WIP:  It is part of a simple animation, will be good, i hope. | |
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| reis Commander     Joined: 13 March 2014 Online Status: Offline Posts: 118 |     Posted: 14 October 2011 at 12:54pm | 
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   I tried to create an iPad, did not work but I want something a bit in half. I need help in the background and icons on the iPad.
   Thank you. | |
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| jalonso Admiral     Joined: 29 November 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 13537 |     Posted: 14 October 2011 at 1:10pm | 
| Originally posted by luizfelipespr I tried to create an iPad, did not work but I want something a bit in half. I need help in the background and icons on the iPad.   Thank you. It is a palette challenge not an apple challenge. Concentrate on challenging yourself by using colors as a directive. These colors are tough to work with so force it. Even tho most entries seem to have taken 'apple' literally this challenge does not have to have an apple company related theme at all. | |
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| reis Commander     Joined: 13 March 2014 Online Status: Offline Posts: 118 |     Posted: 14 October 2011 at 1:29pm | 
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   Thank Jal. But that's what I took from my mind. You can leave I'll do my best!
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